Poem on Alliteration...comments and critiques welcome? - welcome letters for beauty salon samples
   There are candles 
 Look at the pretty lady 
 How to bathe in the quiet 
 Disturbing the peace that you touch 
 His touch sent tremors Tender 
 In the harmony of hearts hermit 
 She is the queen of Excellence 
 The splendor of the sea 
 It flaps and waves with fingers 
 By tidal twitchy 
 Pride beautiful princess 
 As a warrior in the world are trying to win 
 Her beauty is gay 
 A gallon of beautiful joy 
 Watch ... There are sailing in the silent 
 Alliteration: When we have the same consonants is called alliteration in a few words in the lines of a poem. The repeating words to create a special sound in the poem. . 
 Examples: 
 Summer sixty-seven 
 Soft Sinbad Sailors 
 The penetration of the methods of our media 
 Mirage in the fog? 
 Misty Mountains and illusions?   
Saturday, January 2, 2010
Welcome Letters For Beauty Salon Samples Poem On Alliteration...comments And Critiques Welcome?
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They have some excellent examples of alliteration, chweetka. And there are many other examples in this poem. By the way, I'm not familiar with this poem, "There She sails." Is it you? Very well written.
While we're on the subject of literary, you know, "harmony" - the similarity of repeated vowel sounds in syllables, but do not form a complete song? Ie: - repeated gentle 'a' sounds of "tactful handling of the peace ...". It is a powerful tool for writing, if properly used. Poe was great harmony in the craft to create a mysterious atmosphere and foreboding in his poems.
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